Past Students' Work.

Film Title.	Strengths	Weaknesses	Mark
Battered and Bruised	Original typography style, kept true to the BSR theme and concept, rough camera work and unique sound.	The text was a distraction in the middle of thee screen, long edits which made it feel like a long scene.	26/60
Written Syria	Incorporated themes outlined in the BSR films, camera movement was neat, and they kept to the rule of thirds.	Music would be difficult for white British audiences to relate to, who the actual target audience for these films are.	52/60
Cycle	Good use of mise-en-scene, good language, dialogue was rough and relative to the theme.	Poor use of continuity editing, the time of day in the background does not match, shows all times of the day.	29/60
Straight Edge	Good camera work, music was relevant, good use of credits at the side of the screen, good mise-en-scene.	Editing	56/60
Wasters	Good editing, well shot, god use of mise- -en-scene, clearly focusing on the themes shown in BSR films.	looked more like a film trailer rather than the opening 2 minutes of a film due to the voiceover, the credits were too much of a big focus in the clip.	52/60